Now:
Walking down the street, I swim through the sea of people. You can hear the sound of waves crashing as you go past the road. The deafening screeching sounds in the distance block out any further sounds. As you walk on you feel free from the massive amount of people. Your sight

September 26, 2016 at 5:54 pm
I really like the potential here for the development of an extended metaphor. I can’t wait to read more.
CW